20240601 Daily English Writing Practice_Chill out

오송인2024-06-03 10:28

source:: Bonus episode #103 – Wild May | Culips English Podcast
time:: 10
characters:: 244
writing:: I just wanna chill out at home sometimes, but I've have many task on my plate and it goes on and on. Fortunatley there is short time for relaxing, for example when I take a bus I listen podcast or book. I enjoy this time and it give me energy.
corrected1:: I just want to chill out at home sometimes, but I have many tasks on my plate and it seems never-ending. Fortunately, there is some time for relaxing, for example when I take a bus I listen to podcasts or a book. I enjoy this time and it gives me energy.
feedback::
- Consider using "have" instead of "have" for better clarity and cohesion.
- "Fortunatley there is short time for relaxing": It would be clearer to say "Fortunately, I have little time for relaxing."
- "I enjoy this time and it give me energy": Change "give" to "gives" for subject-verb agreement.
- Consider adding a comma after "podcast" for better sentence structure.

Original Sentence	Korean Explanation	Example Sentences
I just wanna ____ at home.	"Chill out"는 집에서 편안하게 시간을 보내다라는 의미입니다.	1. After a long week, I just want to chill out at home. 2. They decided to chill out by the pool. 3. Let's chill out and watch some movies.
Had a fun time ____ in the yard with my wife.	"Hang out"는 편안하게 쉬다, 시간을 보내다라는 의미입니다.	1. We often hang out at the coffee shop. 2. He likes to hang out with friends on weekends. 3. They were hanging out at the park.
So I'm gonna ____ my 40s.	"Enjoy"는 어떤 시간을 즐기다라는 의미입니다.	1. She plans to enjoy her vacation. 2. He wants to enjoy his retirement. 3. They enjoyed their time together.
If I go back and ____ at my life.	"Look back"는 과거를 되돌아보다라는 의미입니다.	1. She looked back at her childhood memories. 2. He likes to look back on his achievements. 3. They often look back on their travels.
I'm hoping that this trend ____ and my 40s will be even better.	"Goes on"는 어떤 일이 계속되다, 지속되다라는 의미입니다.	1. The meeting went on for hours. 2. Life goes on despite the challenges. 3. The story goes on after the climax.